- Glitch effect was strong with creating the discomforting feeling.
- Struggle with the readability of the white text against the background.
- The texture idea for the background was strong, but the execution was off.
- Use a thinner marker/pen or vary the line weight so there is more of a connection to handwriting.
- Another background idea could have been photos/videos of different places they have traveled.
- Inverting the background colors to white and black and using blue for the text may have made the logo easier to read.
Overall, I appreciate the feedback I received from the critique, and I do agree that the contrast and execution of the background idea could have been stronger.
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