Week Eight: A

Today in class we presented our logo animations to the entire for a critique. I showed my animation in context with the end of one of Yes Theory's videos. Below is a list of comments from my classmates and my professor shared during the critique. 

• Glitch effect was strong with creating the discomforting feeling.
• Struggle with the readability of the white text against the background.
• The texture idea for the background was strong, but the execution was off.
• Use a thinner marker/pen or vary the line weight so there is more of a connection to handwriting.
• Another background idea could have been photos/videos of different places they have traveled.
• Inverting the background colors to white and black and using blue for the text  may have made the logo easier to read.

Overall, I appreciate the feedback I received from the critique, and I do agree that the contrast and execution of the background idea could have been stronger.